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mujhe to lag raha hai Vandana jee ,ki ek bahut hee aananddayi jindagi jeene kee charcha ho rahi hai yahan . ek apne jeene ke beparwah andaj ko doosre par aropit kar raha hai ,bahut hee khoobsoorat rachna . apne baat kahne mein aap safal deekh rahi hain Vandana jee .
aapne iss rachna ki gahraayi tak pahunchne ki koshish ki..achchha lagaa .....aap khud ek achchhe rachnaakaar hain ..toh zaahir hai ..achchhai/khoobsurtii hi talaash karte hain rachna mein...Thanks
kai baar itna aage bad jaati hai k peechhe mud kar nahi'n dekhti..aur kai baar iss kadar zakhmi hoti hai k apne andar hi simat jaati hai .. Thankyou Ashok Da
Kuchh pagalpan reha hoga us ki baaton main. Verna koi is tarha apney apne aap ko kaandhe par uthaye bechne to nikalta nahi.
ReplyDeletesirf paagalpan..
Deletemujhe to lag raha hai Vandana jee ,ki ek bahut hee aananddayi jindagi jeene kee charcha ho rahi hai yahan . ek apne jeene ke beparwah andaj ko doosre par aropit kar raha hai ,bahut hee khoobsoorat rachna . apne baat kahne mein aap safal deekh rahi hain Vandana jee .
ReplyDeleteaapne iss rachna ki gahraayi tak pahunchne ki koshish ki..achchha lagaa .....aap khud ek achchhe rachnaakaar hain ..toh zaahir hai ..achchhai/khoobsurtii hi talaash karte hain
Deleterachna mein...Thanks
sach men jab koi rooh men nishaan ban kar rah jaye tabhee zindgee matlab aur maksad patee hai ...
ReplyDeletekai baar itna aage bad jaati hai k peechhe mud kar nahi'n dekhti..aur kai baar iss kadar zakhmi hoti hai k apne andar hi simat jaati hai ..
DeleteThankyou Ashok Da